Hi Shobha,
Interesting. Slowly you are revealing the flash back behind them. As you said already the flash back is moving along with the present incidents. So it is interesting (kossuvathi suthala). Some things are not clear in this epi for me. Mathini (whose mathini Arujun s r else Ammu s) .Even though we can understand that as she is in Arjun s house that may be Arjun s mathini a little clarification is needed from you.
Ammu as of Arjun she attracts us too. Waiting eagerly to see, how she has come to this position after such happenings without any one in the family.
I was waiting to hear from u
As u know.. I cant reveal anything (yet)..
Arjun father of Pranav - epi 1
Arjun and Ammu they seem to know another. - epi 1
Arjun is Pranva's dad but not by blood... epi 2
Ammu comes back to take care of Pranav.. since his mom is dead... epi 2
so this much is clear right..?
Arjun's family details are given in epi 2... main characters are his mom, his anni (madhani) and paati... they seem to hate his wife... you can sense that thr' their dialogues.
In this epi its only Arjun's thoughts about his Wife and fmly's opinion abt her... (ammu has only present role.. her past not yet revealed)
Arjun seems have a flash back.. that does seems to be fascinating.
All the whereabouts about his past is from his own understanding... (not the writer's opinion)
Hope this helps
I just want my writing to give a clear flow of the present and a unclear picture of Arujn and Ammu.. i will not relate these two anywhere till the end.
Romba kuzhappaliyae ...
Just let me know if iam missing out anything.
konjam Puzzle type of story is all I am looking for
Did I achieve that?
