Mental Manathil 14

[kayalmuthu]

Super sis. I like this story sis.nane ninatjukondurinthen sis,last two nobelukku epilog potalauennu nernga pongal ponusa oru vansvil polakku setthu sollirukinga thangd sis.eagerly waiting sis.

 

[n.palaniappan]

Friends here comes the end of mental manathil.. but some more pages need to be written.. will complete after all other short storeies like oru vaanavil pole kaathalum katru mara and vaanam thodaatha megam..

before that need to continue SJM and complete it

yes PRECAP OF SJM shortly today night may be within an hour

MENTAL MANATHIL 14


Thanks for the contiuous support and encouragement.. even though completed this story... not much satisfied.. need to improve..

This story i have written in just 5 days.. very first time in a very small span.. in that account bit satisfied..

Hope will not do this much injustice to any story.. will try to give by taking better longer time for thinking.

ரெம்ப ரெம்ப பிடித்து ரசித்து படித்தேன். நன்றி.
அன்புடன்

 

[n.palaniappan]

Friends here comes the end of mental manathil.. but some more pages need to be written.. will complete after all other short storeies like oru vaanavil pole kaathalum katru mara and vaanam thodaatha megam..

before that need to continue SJM and complete it

yes PRECAP OF SJM shortly today night may be within an hour

MENTAL MANATHIL 14


Thanks for the contiuous support and encouragement.. even though completed this story... not much satisfied.. need to improve..

This story i have written in just 5 days.. very first time in a very small span.. in that account bit satisfied..

Hope will not do this much injustice to any story.. will try to give by taking better longer time for thinking.

I am not accepting your words. Even th' written in short time, I have enjoyed very much.
இந்த மாதிரி கதைகள் அப்ப்ப்ப கொடுக்க வேண்டும்.

அன்புடன்

 

[Noor]

asusual this story also superb. kathai padikum pothum sari padithu muditha piragum sari, kaandeepan and vedha was running in our mind without our control mentally.

 

[aravin22]

Hi mam

ஒரு வழியாய் எல்லாக்குழப்பமும் தீர்ந்து கல்யாணமும் செய்துவிட்டார்கள்,தானும் ஒரு காதல் நாயகன் என்று நிரூபித்துவிட்டார்,அருமையாக இருந்தது இப்பகுதி,சுபமான முடிவும்கூட,mam கதையென்றாலே எல்லோருக்குமே பிடிக்கும்,தொடர்ந்து எழுதுங்கள் உங்கள் பணி சிறக்க கடவுள் துணைபுரிவார்.

நன்றி
Aravin22

 

[Rubiya]

Superb story mam.....at last one msg also....cycling will shape the body. ...☺ siriyavan siriyavan endru ninaithathu ellam kanavagathaan thondriyathu.. Ippothu ethvumae thanakku theriyavillaI endra uruvagam thaan avalidam. ...lovely line mam..... innum konjam story lengthy irunthrukkulam

 

[gani]

haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaai malli, very very super endingpa, bicycle is very good concept, how are you thinking this way, you are really superbbbbbbbbbbbbb thank you so much. bye vidhya.

 

[sindu]

Superb finish.
In just five days you have made magic. Eventhough there are no twist and turns the dialogues are as usual catchy. Nice finish

 

[Balu]

Nalla storypa Mallika nice

 

[shree]

Hi..... Really fantastic