hi maheshwari
ur narration style is always effectively action-packed n thrilling...i can feel it....the reading goes very fast n brings to the edge,eventhough Shruthi's mischief gives a false 'light feeling',the feeling of 'what will happen to her?', prevailed thru out....Ashwin,super mama...!!l love him....
athuvum,that last dialogue,--!!!squeezed me....
pls dont change her chr after the surgery....cant accept....
very effective story telling dr..superb