Mental Manathil 14

[bhu]

Hello mam,
As usual superb, just one doubt, mental manathil appidinnu title vechathaale 'mental' appidinra word niraya murai vanthirucho?? Was it intentional?

Friends here comes the end of mental manathil.. but some more pages need to be written.. will complete after all other short storeies like oru vaanavil pole kaathalum katru mara and vaanam thodaatha megam..

before that need to continue SJM and complete it

yes PRECAP OF SJM shortly today night may be within an hour

MENTAL MANATHIL 14


Thanks for the contiuous support and encouragement.. even though completed this story... not much satisfied.. need to improve..

This story i have written in just 5 days.. very first time in a very small span.. in that account bit satisfied..

Hope will not do this much injustice to any story.. will try to give by taking better longer time for thinking.

Sometimes avasarama panra upma kooda super taste-a irukkum and this story is like that.
But I agree with you on the point that you need to give yourself time for thinking. Waiting for the publish version....

 

[umamanoj64]

சுற்றுப்புற சூழல்ககு முக்கியத்துவம் தந்த பன்...
ஜாம் அன் பட்டர் போட்ட ஸ்வீட் பன்..

 

[Sasideera]

Achacho finally Mana Mana mental manathil love story ipdi manam vittu neengaatha short and sweet story ah Manasula ninnuduchu...

Super mam... We all really enjoyed in this short story.... Inimel bun na Mental manathil than Naabagam varum... We are waiting for SJM...

 

[Pon mariammal]

மல்லி புத்ததகத்திற்கு இன்னும் வருமா...சூப்பர்.
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எல்லோரையும்சைக்கிளில் சுற்றவைக்க எண்ணும் நல்லவனை மெண்டல் ஆக்கிட்டீங்களே....எல்லோரும் என்னை முந்திட்டீங்க ...இனி எதுவும் என்னை சொல்லக்கூடாது.

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[banumathi jayaraman]

Hei Malli dear, chinnathaga irunthalum, konjoondu days-ka ezhuthi irunthalum intha ''MENTAL MANATHIL'' story rombavae azhagana, lovely-yana, cute-and excellent novel pa
I like and loved this story very much pa
intha story-yoda ovvovoru/each episode-yai=yum naan ehthanai thadavai padithaen endru enakkae theriyaathu Malli chellam
intha story-yil no fight, no vengeance, rombavae jovial-ah, lovely-yah romantica, ithu yellavatraiyum vida, vegu yatharthamaga, enga ooru kongu tamil-yil konji vilaiyaadi intha story-yai koduthu irukkeenga pa,
my sweet kisses to you Malli dear
again HATS OFF to you my dear Malli chellam
waiting for lovely continuation of pending short stories from you dear, you take your own time and come with finising touch asap my sweet Malli chellam
waiitng also for our excellent lovely story SJM's precap Malli dear

 

[anupama]

Arumai arumai arumai. Very light hearted sweet and short story. Ur flow rocking as usual. Keep going.

 

[Sundaramuma]

OMG!!! Super Mallika
Ippadi ungalala than ezludha mudiyum.
Romba avasarama mudicha madri oru feel.
well, book varum podhu serthu kodunga. No PROBLEM.
Enakku oru varama network problem.
eppo sariyagum-nu theriyalai.
parpom.....
Thank you very much.Mallika

 

[shanthi]

nice end......cycle sari than,,,,ana ippo makkal parakum vaganam ethir paarkuraanga.............

 

[arasichelvan]

Nice ud Malli sis
Semma romantic ud... Uma ji words la solanum na neraiya "bit" pa...
Ha Ha .. naan sonna madiri car showroom Vedhavuka... கலக்கல் Boss
Mrs and Mr KDB நல்ல கவுக்குரிங்க pa Mrs & Mr Samy ah..
நீங்க ரெண்டு பெரும் லவ் மெண்டல்ஸ் nu எங்களுக்கு எப்போவோ தெரியுமே ...
Superb ending Malli Sissy...
Romanceso Romancessss...
காதல் na காதல் அப்படி ஒரு காதலுங்கோ .....

 

[Vyshusri]

superb story malli mam........unga story la eppayumey love oda feel ey vera level la irukum ithalayum appudi than...ovvoru storyum padika padika i am bcoming more nd more "mental" of ur stories.....keep gng