Aval Naan Payanam Final

Geethanjali

Writers Team
Tamil Novel Writer
#13
Hi nivi chellam....


Enna solla vaarthaigal illadaa... un thamizhai varnikka... athanai azhagu.... ovvoru padhivin aarambathilum nee kodukkum kavi azhagu...
adhanaith thodarndhu varum oru pathiyil avanukkanaa aval thedalai varigalil vadippadhu azhago azhagu...


don't know how to express dear....
antha pathigalaip padikkum podhu really vaanathula parakkira oru feel could'nt express in words...
darlinggggg.......



ippo kadhaikku varuvom...

maraa.... dei kalakkitta poda... enna azhagaa kadhai soldra..?! enga nivi ponnai minjiduva pola nee...?!

adippatu unarvillama kidaikkum podhu koodaa... 'yemma mayilu......' irundhaalum unakku kusumbu adhigamdi... che che adhigam daa... un kooda serndhu naanum ippadi aagitten...:D

ivan panna alumballa, naan thaniyaa sirikiradhaip parthu enga appa kooda, enna indha ponnu nadu raathirila pei maadhiri utkaarndhu sirichittu irukkennu oru terror look vitaaru.... appuram me kapchip


happa kadaisila hospitalla konjam payamuruthittan indha maaran paiyan...
appuram thideernu avan pesuradhu ellam velila ketkudhunu sonna podhu naanae konjam kuzhambitten...
appuramdhan purinjidhu andha pakki manasukkulla pesurennu ninaichi velila pesittu irundhadhu... ivanaa... kadupethuraan my lord nu oru feel, appuram romba sandhoshamaagiduchu... only heeeee...:D


sakthi , maaran rendu perumae cute... ella charactersumae nalla yirundhadhu da...
and especially different way of narration... it was good too dear... kadhai padikkiradhu pola illai ketpadhu polvae oru feel...


appuram... ezhil maraan incident, bus accident, poorni ma admission podhudhaan manasu konjam kastmaa pochu...
matra padi ella idathulayum oru chinna smile loda dhaan read pannen daa...




atlast ?! mokkai kavidhai...??!!! yaaru yaaraip paarthu ippadi oru vaarthi sonna?!
enga kavithayini illlanaa neeyae illa.... paarthu paarthu pondatti kooda serndha piragu writeraiyae kalaaikariyaa?! appuram vachi senjiduvom... be carefullll pichi puduven pichu...



thanks for giving a good story dear....
un ezhuthuppani men melum sirandhonga ulamaara vaazhthugiren... god bless u dear...
 




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sindu

Well-Known Member
#16
Hi Nivedha
Read Aval, naan payanam after my friend mentioned about it.
It's really a nice story a jolly good ride from the beginning. What a story, I liked your way of story telling, present and past is presented like waves without any confusion.
Even serious situation is presented in such a humorous way.. a lively enjoyable story. Thanks
All the best for your next stories. Congrats for completing it
 




S.B.Nivetha

Well-Known Member
#19
hi director...

muthalil unga mana thairiyathai paaraatturennnnn athu yennu ungaluke theriyummmm

ha ha vithiyasamana arambam.... mulukka mulukka hero pesuraaru..

avar paarvayil kathai payanikkithu...
kathayum payanam seyyuthu...

avarum payanam seiraan..

naangalum payaanam seitom...

bodi trichi chennai nu nalla suthi kaatuna d nee..

aana ippdi hero va suthalla vittiyeemaa...

pavam ilaa... payapullaiku std theriyama thaane kulampo kulampunu kulampi appuram eppdiyo

thattu thadumaari unamaya therinju shappaaddinnu mandaya sorinju... pondaattiya samathanam panna ponaa...
vandiiii kavunthu pochaeeee....

aana enga hero eppdi accident e aanalum... thirantha vaai moodaathe... vaaye moodinaalum manasu pesumee...

ippdi pesi pesiyeee oruvaliyaa sakthiya kondu vanthu nikka vachittaanlaa anga nikkiraan... ila ila paduthu irunthaanooo sari anga paduthirukkaan ilaaa

aanalum niruthinanaa illaye... last la doctor a ye kenja vachittaanee.... yappaaa raasaa...

oruvaliyaa oorku vanthaa angayem vaai mooduthaa.... sahppaa sakthi ne paavam di thangame...
ivanai vachuuu neeyellam epdi thaan samalikka poriyooo..

machi kavithai ellam super d...

he he enaku than orusila idathula puriyama pochuuuuuuuu

seekiram adutha kathayoda vaa pullaa
Hii heroineee

Manathai thidapaduthikondu arambucha kathai
Ungaluku than theriumey

Kadavul punniyathula muduchuten machi

FRom first to last ud unoda call sheet kuduthathuku thanks machiii ;-)

Freeya oor suthi kamichiruken d pathu sei

Nama hero marana kandipa marakkamata

Oru valiya std present rendaium kalanthu theliva kathai solitar hero

Kadaisila mokka kavithainu kaala varitar

Ni solra mari unmaila sakthi romba paavanthan

Ha ha ha thank u so muchhhhh machiiiii

Kathaiyoda next kathaiyoda vanthu meet panren
 




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