Aval Naan Payanam Final

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S.B.Nivetha

Well-Known Member
hiii dearss

suspense nu solitu ponavala kanomnu thedunegala....

vanthuten vanthuten... suspense enana Aval Naan Payanam oru mudivu vanthuruchu... maaran intha epi oda ungalidam irunthu vidai perugiran,,,,

so ilamaaran sakthi..... avangaloda payanam.... atha nivetha sona vitham ungaluku pidichirunthatha... ena feel panrega.... sola vango... silent readers... kathaiye mudinjuduchu ipa vanthu solalameyyyyy...

unga comments kaga maran sakthi and nivi waiting.....

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Sarayu

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Tamil Novel Writer
hi director...

muthalil unga mana thairiyathai paaraatturennnnn athu yennu ungaluke theriyummmm

ha ha vithiyasamana arambam.... mulukka mulukka hero pesuraaru..

avar paarvayil kathai payanikkithu...
kathayum payanam seyyuthu...

avarum payanam seiraan..

naangalum payaanam seitom...

bodi trichi chennai nu nalla suthi kaatuna d nee..

aana ippdi hero va suthalla vittiyeemaa...

pavam ilaa... payapullaiku std theriyama thaane kulampo kulampunu kulampi appuram eppdiyo

thattu thadumaari unamaya therinju shappaaddinnu mandaya sorinju... pondaattiya samathanam panna ponaa...
vandiiii kavunthu pochaeeee....

aana enga hero eppdi accident e aanalum... thirantha vaai moodaathe... vaaye moodinaalum manasu pesumee...

ippdi pesi pesiyeee oruvaliyaa sakthiya kondu vanthu nikka vachittaanlaa anga nikkiraan... ila ila paduthu irunthaanooo sari anga paduthirukkaan ilaaa

aanalum niruthinanaa illaye... last la doctor a ye kenja vachittaanee.... yappaaa raasaa...

oruvaliyaa oorku vanthaa angayem vaai mooduthaa.... sahppaa sakthi ne paavam di thangame...
ivanai vachuuu neeyellam epdi thaan samalikka poriyooo..

machi kavithai ellam super d...

he he enaku than orusila idathula puriyama pochuuuuuuuu

seekiram adutha kathayoda vaa pullaa
 

Sri B

Well-Known Member
aah final ah..itha ethir pakalaye...miss maran's looty:(...awesome story&characters shakthi-ilamaran... maran thanoda love story ah solra madiri story ah solirukinga rombave superb...kavithayum kuda;););)...namaloda travelling la yaravathu oru interesting person ah meet panuvom..apo avanga kudave travel panikitu avanga life story pathi ketutu vara madiri..oru feel.. excellent!!!;):)keep rocking sis!!!:):):)
 

Adhirith

Well-Known Member
Lovely Nivedha....

திகிலூட்டும் பயணமாக ஆரம்பித்தாலும்,
பயணத்தின் முடிவு பற்றி சொல்ல வார்த்தைகள் இல்லை...
அவர்களோடு நானும் பயணித்தேன்....

Very interesting conversation between Mara,and Sakthi..
Superb meaningful dialogue delivery..

I really,really enjoyed this story
after a long time...
An unforgettable story with
an interesting narration..
with superb characters....


I couldn't control my laugh after reading
the last para....

யாரும்மா அது,மொக்கை கவிதை
எழுதும் அவங்க கிட்ட சொல்லுங்கள்
அவர்களின் அடுத்த கதைக்காக
காத்திருக்கிறேன் என்று....:D

Wishes for the next,best....
 

krithikaravi

Well-Known Member
Hi Nivi ,

Superb ending machi. Maaran chance illa awesome and sakthi also maaran ku sariya na jodi sakthi machi... Nalla comedy romantic story da. Doctor and nurse ellam sema hospital nu oru feel varala da. Maarannuku oru dose injection ellam pathathu sema da. Kavithai superb... Last ah bedroom kudutha thriller effect superb... Totally Maaran kuda enga payanam arumaiyana payanam. Next story ooda sikiram va machi....:)
 

kayalmuthu

Well-Known Member
Hai sis ha ha ha story read pannurappa ellam smiling face sis.appapo kinjam tension akkinalum. Story way s.of atyle different andsweet sis.unga kavithai supero super sis.read pannumpothu love effect than sis.nice.thanks for different story sis.
 

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