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Krishnanthamira

Writers Team
Tamil Novel Writer
ஷ்யாம் விஜயகிட்ட பேசற dialigues எல்லாம் அருமை. ரொம்ப natural - ஆ நம்ம பேசக்கூடியது.

நல்லா வந்து சேர்ந்துதுங்க ரெண்டும் அடுத்தவங்களோட உல்லாச மனநிலையை கெடுக்க.
ஏம்மா பாவனா, tour -க்கு வந்து துக்கம் கொண்டாடி ஏம்மா மத்தவங்களையும் கஷ்டப்படுத்தற?

டேய் ஷ்யாம், புலிக்கு உன்னைத்தான்டா விருந்தாக்கணும் இப்ப.
Same
I would hate to cry parade on someone else enjoyment. Vijay is partly at fault here. He shouldn't be attentive to her when he feels like it. She is still in love with him la. Pavam thaan
But worst lot to bring to a trip na adhu idhu rendum thaa
 

Krishnanthamira

Writers Team
Tamil Novel Writer
.Nice.Vijay is lucky to have Shyam as a friend ,a perfect sounding board But Vijay is turning a deaf ear to Shyam’s advice.Left to herself Bhavana might try to come to terms with reality.What Vijay is doing is not right.

Is the story turning from social genre to action adventure?It seems they have entered some prohibited area.which Shyam is aware of .But why Bhavana is behaving so irresponsibly? How could the others allow her to get down from the vehicle? As if she is taking a stroll in the park.
In the midst of adventure Vijay and Bhavana fighting odds discover true love appadinu poda porangala author?
Same here. She not only endangered her but the whole lot. Very callous behavior from her. And Vijay atleast he should be sensible. But seems he is far away from it. Make shaam the hero
 

Novel-reader

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Same here. She not only endangered her but the whole lot. Very callous behavior from her. And Vijay atleast he should be sensible. But seems he is far away from it. Make shaam the hero
Vijaykku kilo kilovaa puthi Sonna Arivaali Shyam dhaan permission illadha zone-kku poittu irukkaan.

Bhavana oru loosu. Andha loosu ippa ellaraiyum sikkalil niruthi vechrukku. Ippadi oru adventurous sikkalukku moola kaaranam indha Shyamoda asattu thunichal dhaane. Ivan edhukunga hero vaaganum?
Ok Unga aasaippadi avan hero-nnalum sari. Aanal avanukku puli than heroine . OK-VAA ?
 

Sugaaa

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:p:p:D...

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