@P.Barathi
Poetic narration, felt good to read.
thank you so much barathi sis
Only thing is that at times I find it difficult to follow who is who because of one line dialogues and lots of nick names.
eluthum podhe feel agum.. athunala than yaroda dialogue nu mention pannuvom.. apdiyum confuse pannuthu pola.. editing la check panrom sis. and nick names sinamika ku mattum than iruku.
kanmani nu yazhanum athamma nu agaravum solvaanga. later agaravume kanmani nu than solluva. avanga bond represent panna than apdi. athuvum konjam confuse panniduchu pola.
thank you for mentioning these things sis <3 final copy ku useful ah irukum.
Poetic narration, felt good to read.
thank you so much barathi sis
Only thing is that at times I find it difficult to follow who is who because of one line dialogues and lots of nick names.
eluthum podhe feel agum.. athunala than yaroda dialogue nu mention pannuvom.. apdiyum confuse pannuthu pola.. editing la check panrom sis. and nick names sinamika ku mattum than iruku.
kanmani nu yazhanum athamma nu agaravum solvaanga. later agaravume kanmani nu than solluva. avanga bond represent panna than apdi. athuvum konjam confuse panniduchu pola.
thank you for mentioning these things sis <3 final copy ku useful ah irukum.
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