நீ என் காதல் புன்னகை -20(final)

[Renugamuthukumar]

பூவை புயலா மழையா தென்றலா
அழகா
உதய் என்னும் முரட்டு காளையை
சமாளிச்சு காதல் புன்னகை
வீசுவது அழகு
அருமையான கதை

Thank you sis

 

[Renugamuthukumar]

Renu dear, not satisfied with this story.
Bcoz Uday was sweet except his temper.
But poovai was very strict, always argue with Uday. Sometimes I felt bored.
Ur style of writing make me feel happy.
It's missing in this. Might be bcoz of story flow.
Anyhow thanks Renu. Waiting for your next story

Enna lack aaguthunnu analyze pannikkiren sis.
Thank you

 

[Renugamuthukumar]

Nice update ma happy ending

Thank you friends

 

[Renugamuthukumar]

Very goo entertaining family novel. Smart Poovai and her self respect & honesty . Udhai and his angry outburst, tireless effort to achieve anything for his loved one. Kamala and her arrogance but wonderful mother to Udhai. Kindhearted Quite soft Nathan. Kind hearted Paavendhan and Siva. Alcoholic Jayanthan. All the characters are narrated very well.

Thank you sis

 

[sony]

Nice sis

 

[Radhi]

Nice

 

[Shobana selvarani]

Very nice story... Anti hero patthi fb post naanum padichaen..... Neenga atha purinjikitu udhay character ah sethukirukinga super.... Udhay mela mistake irukathunu enaku thonitae irunthathu.... Athum unga storyngrathunalathan hero mela kovam varala... Yena neenga herova epothum kodurakarana kaatinathu illa... So herokana niyayam senjiruvanganu terium... Atha senjim mudichirukinga super... Ithae story neenga suspense writer ah elithirunthingana udhay kettavanae ninaika vaaipiruku... Unga storyla ithan first story ah padikiravangalukum udhay kettavanavae therivan... Really super antihero story... Niraiya idathula udhay kaga azha vachitinga...athum Kamalamma iranthapin avanoda feelings solla varthaigal illa...avanoda valiya engalukum kadathitinga... Poo character sema...

 

[Dine]

Nice story

 

[Renugamuthukumar]

Nice sis

Nice

Nice story

Thank you so much friends

 

[Renugamuthukumar]

Very nice story... Anti hero patthi fb post naanum padichaen..... Neenga atha purinjikitu udhay character ah sethukirukinga super.... Udhay mela mistake irukathunu enaku thonitae irunthathu.... Athum unga storyngrathunalathan hero mela kovam varala... Yena neenga herova epothum kodurakarana kaatinathu illa... So herokana niyayam senjiruvanganu terium... Atha senjim mudichirukinga super... Ithae story neenga suspense writer ah elithirunthingana udhay kettavanae ninaika vaaipiruku... Unga storyla ithan first story ah padikiravangalukum udhay kettavanavae therivan... Really super antihero story... Niraiya idathula udhay kaga azha vachitinga...athum Kamalamma iranthapin avanoda feelings solla varthaigal illa...avanoda valiya engalukum kadathitinga... Poo character sema...

Thank you so much sis