நீ இருக்கும் நெஞ்சம் இது …3.2

[ann]

Hi Pragi sister, your story is nice. But the writing style is little bit difficult for reading. Because I am not able to understand whose dialog is that and to whom. Hope you will take this in positive way. All the very best.

 

[Pragathi Ganesh]

Hi Pragi sister, your story is nice. But the writing style is little bit difficult for reading. Because I am not able to understand whose dialog is that and to whom. Hope you will take this in positive way. All the very best.

Thank u sister for ur valuable feedback, I will try to rectify in my next novel ...

 

[Padma mohan]

Nice