தேய்வது நிலவல்ல Final

[mallika]

தேய்வது நிலவல்ல Final 1
https://www.mallikamanivannan.com/தேய்வது-நிலவல்ல-final-1/


தேய்வது நிலவல்ல Final 2

 

[Lakshmimurugan]

Nice story.

 

[Karthika_Kausik]

My first story of yours.

Plot is little illogical. Lot of spelling mistakes. Explaining scenes in your words instead of the characters dialogues make it look like a essay.

Cause is good. But too many characters... Keep writing

 

[MEGALAVEERA]

Nice ending ma
Nan illava yrthirpakkala nalla twist super

 

[மகிழ்மதி]

Nice story.

thanku sister

 

[மகிழ்மதி]

thanku sister.

 

[மகிழ்மதி]

My first story of yours.

Plot is little illogical. Lot of spelling mistakes. Explaining scenes in your words instead of the characters dialogues make it look like a essay.

Cause is good. But too many characters... Keep writing

thanku sister.

 

[Abarna Arivoli]

Nice story mam

 

[மகிழ்மதி]

Nice story mam

Thanku sister

 

[Rabi]

Nice