Nice sis. can i make suggestion sila idathula yenna solla vareenga ? ,yendha character pesuraanga, yen andha charcter ippadi react pannuraanga .. ippadi non sinkaa iruku could you pls check it..
Sis story is going good. can i make a suggestion .. in hospital scene you described Bharathiyai "ஏடுத்து" pathila vera word substitute pannalama.. u know wat i mean yeduthu means my knowledge they u use it after death only. just a thought.