Pursuit Of Love - 1

Discussion in 'Sindulakshmi Jagan's Pursuit of Love' started by SinduLakshmiJagan, Mar 11, 2017.


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Poll closed Mar 18, 2017.
  1. Good start....

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  1. sumiram

    sumiram Well-Known Member

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    Nice start. Pranav, prathu kodutha introla impress agittan. Lasta oru touch vachitaye prathu enna ninaippalo? Comment enga panila thanglishla podalam thhane pa?
     
  2. priya durai

    priya durai Well-Known Member

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    nice title dear
    pranav & pratiksha nice name combination
    quite interesting read in english
     
  3. Lalithaganesan

    Lalithaganesan Well-Known Member

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    Nice start
     
  4. Sharmila Natarajan

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    I have a few questions for you: Why did you choose to write in English? It seems like the narration is a literal translation from Tamil to English, which shouldn't be the case. If you want to be a good Tamil writer, the best way to achieve that is to read as much Tamil as possible. If you want to improve writing in English, I would suggest you to read English books. Reading different authors will make you think in English.

    I read a few lines: "were" was confused with "where".

    Please be careful with spellings, dictions, grammar and sentence formation. It's very imprtant.

    Good luck!
     

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