Kavipritha's Mittaai Puyalae 26

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HemaSriram

New Member
Until finish ur story I didn't move to next site. Nice pa. Gonna good.

But can improve wit some dialogues pa. Felt less dialogue nd more narration.

If I m right take it as comment pa,else ignore.
 

kavipritha

Writers Team
Tamil Novel Writer
Until finish ur story I didn't move to next site. Nice pa. Gonna good.

But can improve wit some dialogues pa. Felt less dialogue nd more narration.

If I m right take it as comment pa,else ignore.
thanks hema..... mmmm... thanks to saying.... u r try to read my next story na thanks ma...
 

Priyapraveenkumar

Well-Known Member
super super lovable ending.....
Gadheesh sakshi alagana valkai anga kadhal romance ellamea super....
ivlo varudam kadanthum avanga anbu innum adhigama romba alaga irukku...
gudumba otrumai athe pol romba arumai....
superb story i like it lot....Gadhees Sakshi lovely pair...
 

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